Summer writing project (Day Thirty-Three)

I printed out my draft today to take a look at it overall. Wendy Belcher recommends doing this in her book, Writing Your Journal Article in Twelve Weeks. Particularly when you're trying to make sure that your argument is coming through, you should put the whole paper in front of you to figure out if what you're saying is clearly supporting your argument (and that you make it clear how your evidence supports your argument). Mine needs some work on that, I fear... 

More work on that tomorrow, after I attend my son's kindergarten graduation...